Thursday, 5 May 2016

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W.A.L.T write a poem about the moon

Discription
 rosie brang us down to the mat and she said we had to make a poem about the moon and we had a choice of what tipe of poem we could do and I chose a shape poem well it's not really a shape poem because I just put a circle around it and I thought of doing a bit about the moon and I thought of putting lessen about what happened to rona so I did

Target
I think i should get in between green and yellow

Feedback: next time recheck the writing( quentin )

Feedforward: caid it is a great poem in general Ka pai
Draft

The real poem

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