Sunday, 27 November 2016

Te reo book

WALT Write A Maori book

We had to write a book in te reo Maori 

Feedback That's really cool how you did instructions.
Feed forward Maybe make the photos more bigger.

Wednesday, 16 November 2016


WALT Write reflections

After the market day we had to reflect on our hole experience 

Feedback It is really cool how you have put the hats.
Feed forward You could of had a better description.

How to make lemonade

WALT Write instructions 

After market day we had make some instructions about our product

Feedback: the steps are very clear
Feedforward: you could cut your steps into more steps.

Wednesday, 9 November 2016


WALT Work for a business 

We have been working in a business for 10 weeks for market day

Feedback I like how much work you have done in the slide.
Feed forward I your description can be longer and better.

Target green 

Monday, 7 November 2016

Buddy novel study

WALT Ingage into a buddy novel study

We had to go in a pear and we had a book to read. We had to read every chapter and we had to do different tasks

Feedback: you have done heaps of work keep it up. Riley.

Feed forward: maybe you could explain what the tasks are.

Te makete

WALT Use Te reo

 We had to make a movie in Te reo for market day

Feedback I really like the video. The photographer must be amazing

Feed forward I don't think the background of works on the poster

Sunday, 6 November 2016


WALT Write our own questions and make a pie graph

We had to make a pie graph. We had to make a question.

Feedback : The poster is kind of tidy and organised but you did a good job.

Feed forward: Maybe you could explain a bit more about the pie graph. Riley.

Target green

Thursday, 20 October 2016


WALT Make graphs

We have been learning to make different graphs and we had to do a survey and then we all had to vote once in each category. Then-our roopu whanau group got a category and my one was what activities consumers would like to do. After we voted we had to do different graphs.

Feedback I think that you have done a good job at making the graphs 
Feed forward next time you should not be as Scribbly with the colouring  

Target orange 

Pie graph 
Strip graph 
Block graph 
Bar graph 
Pie graph 

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Sports start

WALT travel bellence and roll

Every Monday and Thursday we have been doing sports start and we have been learning different traveling and roll and stretch and then we went into groups and we had to make a routine

Feedback well done I like your video
Feed forward next time you could say what the movements are

Wednesday, 7 September 2016


WALA Geometry

So this is my 2d shape drawings and it was hard to draw all the shapes and I used a ruler 

Feedback I think you did good and your photo is very clear.
Feed forward  I think you need to make your photo have less people in it but you can.

Sunday, 4 September 2016


WALA Geometry 

I have been learning geometry and I had to make a friend solve this problem and Meihana 

Feedback nice challenge
Feed forward just use the book don't have that background 

What am I 
I have 2 faces and a point no vertices and no parelal sides it's a pyrimid


WAL geometry

I have been learning about geometry and I had to make a tangram. Maia had to do it and it was a cat

Feedback  Cool and funny.

Feed forward More photos.


WALT Research about our country

We were put in a group of six and then we had to research about it. And I did Greece 

Feedback: I think your introduction is fantastic because it makes me want to read more.
Feed forward: I think you need to edit a few of your slides because it does not really make sense.

Target I think I deserve a green target because I worked hard on it

Thursday, 1 September 2016

Seed to table

WALT cook food from the country we are researching 

We have been doing seed to table. We have been in a group of 6 and we have been cooking foods from diferent country's. I did Greece. The parents that helped me was Marnie and Marisha. My group made spanikopita and I put some of the pastry on the pie

Feedback It is really good and it looks tasty., 
Feed forward maybe you should not have that much photos.

Target i think I deserve a orange because I wasn't really cooking anything I was taking pictures

Tuesday, 30 August 2016


WAL geometry

We have a passport for geometry and this is one of the tasks to do 

Feedback l like your 3D thing ok 

Feed forward need a bit of colour for the house 

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Maths treasure hunt

Walt find shapes

We have been doing a passport and this is one of the activitys and I found all of the shapes

Feedback well done for finding the objects 

Feed forward maybe you could put your evaluation on your post. Riley 

Tuesday, 23 August 2016


WAL geometry 

So for maths we have been doing geometry so my cube has eight vertices six faces and twelve edges and eight parallel sides and that's how you describe a cube in maths words

Feedback: this is great caid! Kei reira! Very mathy too.

Feed forward : hmm well I think you should put a T on you're WALT next time lol.

Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Task 6

WALA the olympics

We have been doing tasks about the Olympics and this is the last one

Feedback I think you could have made it more inviting 
Feedforward It looks like you have a lot of information 

Target orange 

Catch me if you can

Every Monday and Thursday we have been going outside and doing some sports
Here is a link for a catch me if you can video

Feedback I think that you did well because most of your marks were green 

Feedforward try get all green next time 
A photo of us entercepting

Sunday, 14 August 2016

Discovery time

WALT Show excelence in all that we do

We have been doing activities every Monday 

Feedback I think that it has lots of information 

Feedforward I think you could have made it more colourful 

Thursday, 11 August 2016

Task 5

WALA the olympics 

Description We have been doing tasks about the olympics and I had to make my own mascot and this is task 5

Feedback: I love your mascot even if the eyes are cross eyed 

Feedforward: Maybe you could write more information about vimicius.
Target green

Description about my mascot
My mascot is a kiwi but in human form and he can send messages to the whole world and he was born the 10nth of August 2016 and he can speak different languages and he is a kiwi because I'm a kiwi and he also represents NZ 

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Task four

WALA the olympics 

So every week we have been tasks about the Olympics and this is task four 4 wha and we had to look up what the three words (which is the moto of the Olympics) and the three words are altius citius fortius 

Feedback Well done . I like how you have done your layout 

Feed forward Next time you could add more in your description . Kate 

Target orange

Monday, 8 August 2016

Te reo

WAL Te reo

Description so we have been learning about aroha atu aroha mai and kei reira as well as koia kei a koe
And I made a poster of kei reira and koia kei a koe and a video about aroha atu aroha mai with nikau 

Feedback well done caid I love the movie

feedforward maybe next time you could have your handwriting tidier I'm just being honest.

Sunday, 7 August 2016

Discovery post

WALT Show excellence in everything that we do

Description every Monday we have discovery time and we do a lot of activitys 

Feedback good you had a laugh

Feed forward put the word in better

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

Task 2 and 3

WALA the Olympics

Description Every week we have been doing tasks and here is my two

Feedback Great work I like the title and the drawing 

Feed forward Do a Cool font or different coloured font

Orange target

Monday, 1 August 2016

Discovery post

Walt show excellence 

Description: we have Been doing discovery time on Monday and this is a sheet about it

Feedback good you sorted out your problem

Feed forward make the picture bigger 

Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Task one

WALT: describe ourselves in Māori!

This is my pepeha plus what I like and my friends we worked on this for three days!

Feedback: It could have better photos (Nikau)

Feed forward: It's very easy to read. (Nikau)

Target orange

Yellow target: because I could of done better because the photos could be better!

Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Sports start

WALT strike and field the ball

Description: so for sports start we have been playing a game called make a choice and so there are 2 teams and one team will field the ball and there would be a boler from that team and one person from the Atherton team will hit the ball and for a warm up we did a little game that was simula to the game I talked about

Feedback: Nice work I think you did a really good job. I love the John cena.

Feedforward: I think you could have explained how you play the game.

My sports start assessment 

Monday, 27 June 2016


WALT to be story tellers

Description: so when the year sixes go to Japanese the year 5s and 4s do storytelling with with joys class and Brenda's and so first we listened to 5 story's of how the constellation got into the sky and joy Brenda Rosie and whaea metarena and a real story teller and then we made our own and we got a star map to find a constalasion 

Target green

Feedback Ilike the Order of things 

Feedforward net time spell constellation right

The  success critarea 
  • Add detail, through actions or the way you stand
  • make sure your story makes sense
  • descriptive language
  • tell the story in the right order
  • Beginning, middle and the end
  • expression
  • have a clear voice
  • Be creative
  • involve your audience
  • practice
  • Good pace, take your time but not too much time
  • Use a few props
  • Scene
  • Eye contact with the audience
  • building suspense
  • changing your voice
The star map 
The order of my story
My story bourd

Sunday, 26 June 2016

Te reo

W.A.L.T maori sentences 

Description: for tereo we have been learning about food and so we made a slide about food and we were aloud to work with 1 or 2 other peaple and I worked with nikau 

Target yellow

Feedback: I like your characters and your Maori words. Jada

Feedforward: next time you could put nikaus name on the side that he is on.