Wednesday, 24 June 2015

We made hot chocolate in maori







My haiku poem


need to know about syllables
need to know about Matariki
stick with the 5,7,5 pattern
use you fingers to help

plan - brainstorm words associated with Matariki

Thursday, 18 June 2015

Te reo

Kei roto I te pouaka te arani.

We are learning te reo

Sorry if it's blurry just come to our class

My writing


Success Criteria: we will know we have achieved this when:


  • we can state our point of view clearly in the introduction and the conclusion
  • we can back each argument with relevant evidence and detail
  • our argument is mainly in the present Tense
  • we use connectives which link our ideas within the argument: because, consequently, so, therefore
  • we can structure the argument using firstly, secondly, finally and making sure each point has it's own paragraph
  • we can use persuasive devices such as Statistics: ‘More than 50%.....’

Come to my class if it's to blurry.we are learning to make a argument

Monday, 15 June 2015

Wednesday, 3 June 2015

Draft writing

The statement is:  Should Goldilocks enter the three bears house and I disagree.