Tuesday, 17 February 2015

Plan

This is Jamie's and Caid  plan of the spiders gift if you want to see the video come to room 11.

Tuesday, 10 February 2015

WALT describe - Caid's writing will be posted soon!!

Describe a character

WALT describe a character
Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.

Success Criteria:

  • Draft
  • Title
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end?
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • language features - similes
  • punctuation - Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends?
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in
  • make sure it makes sense - Proof read

Monday, 9 February 2015

Tuesday, 3 February 2015