Tuesday, 10 February 2015

WALT describe - Caid's writing will be posted soon!!

Describe a character

WALT describe a character
Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.

Success Criteria:

  • Draft
  • Title
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end?
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • language features - similes
  • punctuation - Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends?
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in
  • make sure it makes sense - Proof read

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Caid, I really like the way you described the colour of your hair when you were young and how it has changed. Ngā Mihi, Rosie

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